Rofl ... it really was long ^^

aniwaiiz ... it was realli gud ^^ ... i wish I'd write sumthin that brilliant wen I'm mad ... :( ... oh well XD

aniwaiiz ... 5/5 ... keep it up!! ... luv alwaiiz =D

Well you come out with some awesome poetry when your angry! Excellent choice of words and I loved your rhymes!! I feel poetry is best when one is angry actually, you'll put no better emotions (other then love) onto paper! This was awesome..hope your feeling better now?
_Krissey

P.S I appreciate your honest feedback on our work..its nice to know what someone truly feels (about the STD thing..you'd be surprised how many have on at my school which is what I was aiming at!)

I loved the way the emotion radiates off of it. i get angry a lot too but i can never write anything this good. i dont even have much patience to write one that long even if i was really pissed off.

comment and rate back please, thanks

Very powerful emotions! I like it because of the fact that you managed to express that anger so well I can almost feel it. I'm sorry you were that angry when you wrote it though and sincerely hope it will br the last time you feel like that =)
5/5