Cascading {Lai}

by Natalie   Aug 15, 2006


Dissolving passions,
With leaking actions,
Dismissed.
Cascading bridges,
Surrounding ridges,
Collapsed.
Haunting memories,
Locked within diaries,
Erased.

Cryptic stories hide,
Covering fake pride,
Obscure.
Releasing anguish,
With bitter English,
Deprived.
Stealing innocence,
Backlashing defense,
Stronger.

August 15th 2006
Copyright (c) Natalie.

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A Lai comprises of 5 syllable couplets separated by
a 2 syllable line. The number of lines in a stanza is 9.
Each group of couplets and 2 syllable lines follow the
rhyme scheme "aab"; this is derived from an old
French form.
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  • 16 years ago

    by Hind

    Very well put together..5/5 def. this is gonna go in my favorite poems section..=]

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Hmmmm.
    I haven't read a poem with this stlye ever. I really must say, I enjoyed it quite a bit actually. It was very nicely written, and the words where amazing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Audrey

    One of the few fives ive given. Your going directly to faves.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    I have never seen that style of poem before, it looks very difficult. Never-the-less, you did a fantastic job, yet again. Your vocabulary is just perfect in all of your poems, using a wide range to describe everything. I love reading your poems. Keep it up. =] 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I honestly did not enjoy the ending as much as I did the rest of them poem. However, this was wonderfully written for you have amazing talent, espically in writing in forms. Good job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5,5

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