Torn...

by Sophie   Aug 16, 2006


Her mind is blowing,
Boiling to the rim.
"You are useless and
It's all because of him!"

In her hand she clutches
A silver shining blade.
So sharp and so painful.
Her conscious begins to fade.

She slightly lifts her head.
And looks up at the roof.
That guy meant so much to her
And here is the proof.

The blood begins to seep.
Along side all the tears.
Such a simple little action
Had brought about many fears.

The tortured body lays.
In a dark lonely corner.
Such a silly little boy,
Had just completely torn her.

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  • 17 years ago

    by somehow broken

    Amazing!

  • 17 years ago

    by jackie

    Wow i really liked it it was awesoem!

  • 17 years ago

    by justfloating

    Wow you have a real talent well done.
    from sophie :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jess

    I love this poem an thanks for tha support.... keep in touch an keep writin gud poems for me to read

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, wow Sophie! That was excellent, definetely the best poem I have read of yours! The flow was flawless and all the rhymes worked perfectly.. You used so much emotion and I loved every line of it! Great job hunny! 5/5