Comments : Turn your back

  • 17 years ago

    by broken reflection

    Very freaky *me likes!

  • 17 years ago

    by Carrotgirl

    I would chanhge the line to "killing you" to make it flow a little better otherwise an excellent but somewhat disturbing poem, well done Elise

  • 17 years ago

    by Carrotgirl

    Of killing (I mean)