Comments : Pick-Up Line

  • 11 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Lol, i liked it. It was nice to read a funny one on here for once that actually was worth my time. Keep up the good work. 5/5 :)
    -Jenna xo

  • 11 years ago

    by Lu

    Baby I wanna…
    Oh, that could get lewd.
    What a nice pair of…
    Damn! That sounded crude
    ^^
    My absolute favorite part .....
    Great write Mark ! You put some giggle in my day ...

  • 11 years ago

    by ~DaYiS~

    WOW!! real funny, loved it!! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Lola

    You made me laugh..always a good thing. Funny and clever..i like smart humor. (its harder)

  • 11 years ago

    by *unpredictable*

    Wow, omg. it's so funni.

  • 11 years ago

    by Deana

    I really liked this,women do make it hard on you guys ,having to come up with all those lies can`t be easy. Just kidding . this was really funny.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jul

    Lol..that was hilarious! nice job 5/5:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Marina

    My favorite part is the past parigraph... "Nothing lasts forever, we dont have to fight, i'll always loveyou... atleast for tonight." its beautful... so comment mine sometime.
    -Marina...

  • 11 years ago

    by Rachael

    Thats so kewl I like your poem and how did you come up with something that relate sto so many people.

  • 11 years ago

    by Tormented

    HAHAHAHA! the first 2 stanzas were very funny! I loved this poem! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by ღ Dark Princess ღ

    Haha! Nice one, Mark.

  • 11 years ago

    by Zach Buenger

    Another great one, very funny

  • 11 years ago

    by Bug1219

    Omg i liked that that was really good 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Brooke Amity

    I really liked this poem.
    Lough out loud poem.
    Very well done.
    ..xx

  • 11 years ago

    by +Purple Sky+

    Lol!! Thats hilarious :D

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Very funny, clever and realistic. Thanks for the laugh!

  • 10 years ago

    by Navy Blue Heart

    Haha :D Excellent :D It was funny and light yet slightly sentimental at the same time :D I loved 'I think fluffy thoughts that could knock of your socks but each time I speak the fluff turns to rocks', I probably misquoted quite badly there as I was doing it from memory so sorry about that. It's such a good metaphor though :D Loved it loved it loved it :D