This poem is so the truth it tells the basci facts of teens how we try to hide the way we feel we don't want people to see it and the more we hide it the more we hrt this poem has the truth written all over it

I like it and know sadly on how u feel it was pritty good! keep it up

This is a very emotional poem. You seem to have a lot of sadness in you and have reflected it into your poems. I like them. Well done.

This is a really good poem

Wow this is a reli gd poem xx keep it up xx

I liked this one more!i liked it more than the first one.but still u miss the strong passion, even stronger than this one 4/5

Wow. another beautiful and amazing poem. Great job. Your an amazing poet!

I love it. i think the ending is great, i wouldnt change a thing

The ending is ok but lets see the next two stanzas then i ll tell u

The ending u showed me was great...it really gave the poem a great ending..put it up...but if u ask my opinion, you should line the poem upp a lil more so it looks good..but it was really amazing...5-5

Srry it took so long to respod baxx my computer froze

Alright, first of all: And I hope for better days but they just get worst- that should be worse not worst. But other than that every one has picked up the mistakes.

This was a really good poem to read, it is so true and most people can relate so well coz a lot of people feel the same. The best thing about it was the lack of cliches and the message in it I really enjoyed it. Keep writing =]

Pip xxx

Awesome poem...
I'm amazed. Its like WOW!
Keep up the great work

I feel ur pain. Keeep it ^

Wow u are soo good at writtin ur poems...i kno how u feel in these poems..cuz i go thro the same things

I liked this one. I can relate too much!
you really put all your emotions into your writting.

I love this. I'm the same as most people here and can relate to it so much. Hiding how we really feel is often easier than showing all the sadness, although after a while it can get so tough. I loved the line:
"No where to go but out of my mind!"
Great work. Keep it up =]

Wonderful poem! What a unique write, very heartfelt. I know how you feel. Keep up your great work.

Wow, this is so well written. I can relate to this one aswell. Though you shouldn't want to, nor kill yourself if you where thinking about it. Anyway, great work.

Good poem...one little spelling thing.."my self" isnt two words..its just one "myself"....anyways.,.just pointing that out...not too important...the poem its self was a bit distracting cause of the long sentences and because of that the flow seemed a bit off...but the words were beautiful and the meaning was nice:):)