Comments : Perfection

  • 17 years ago

    by Electric Monkey

    Good poem. So many of my friends think that starvation is a good way to lose weight or forget the past. Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet As Sugar

    Nice poem! good job !
    thanxx for commenting on my poem hun! take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet As Sugar

    Nice poem! good job !
    thanxx for commenting on my poem hun! take care

  • 17 years ago

    by emmerz

    I think most girls at some point in their life go through just a bit of this.... great job, keep it up! and thx for commenting on my poemm
    **Emily**

  • 17 years ago

    by oOo Candi Mami oOO

    Thats true...stupid celeberties are goin crazy bein all anorexic ..and so many girls are pressured to loose weight..ood poem..me likes (:

  • 17 years ago

    by Dancing On The Ceiling

    I can also relate to this one... a had a little problem with the whole eating thing.
    good job

  • 17 years ago

    by oOo Candi Mami oOO

    THiS WAS CUT3..

  • 17 years ago

    by *heidi;

    Haha!i love it!!!!!!!5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ABake

    This is cute...and thanks for the comment sweet heart..lol...

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Every single girl needs to read this poem and then they'll understand how NOT to try and lose weight!
    Well done in writing such a powerful poem in such simple words
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Soul To Squeeze

    OMG! thanx. 4 being such a great role model. ur young but you can write. dont stop writeing!

  • 17 years ago

    by jello

    This was good. A good message and had a good flow. good job. 5/5

    thanks for the comment

  • 17 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Lovely poem, good job!! Awesome message!! 5/5!! Keep up the awwesome work! I love reading your poems!! Thanx for the comment, I will try that!!! 5/5
    Much Love,
    ~*Danielle*~

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Wow this is amazing. i know many people that have tried to lose weight this way but it doesn't work out and its the worst way you could ever do it. this poem has a great message. your poems are amazing and i can't believe your so young and write so good. a future in writing is in store for you.
    5/5

    -chelsea;

    ps. thank you for the sweet comment. your poems are simply amazing and i want to write like you.

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Good poem,very good message