Simply beautiful! Inspiring and full of heartfelt emotion... I love the last line, it's so true. So many of us really don't give ourselves the chance to make a difference in the world or even within ourself.

I especially loved the feeling behiind this poem. what you were trying to say within the words. so true and i know what you mean. please check out my 2 of a similiar theme and i think you will accept i know what you mean they are to serve the servants and bow down now. this is your 2nd poem i've read and i really respect you even from what little i've read

Great poem thanks for comment on Let it be

Truly amazing, every poem you write is an inpiration to me... keep writing and i'll keep reading...
one's life is the greatest gift of all yet we tend to forget that most amazing gift...

best wishes...
SM

I lthink this is good i really like it, keep on writing

The flow here is so deep, it's wonderful! 5/5

So deep and so true, truly amazingly written. I totally agree with the message of this piece. The first stanza is my favorite. I like the wording and the atmosphere that you created very much.