Your writing is VERY good....I have to admit.... But be A little bit careful with the spelling mistakes ;) Keep up the good work...Excellent job :D

Hey thank you for the comment...and i love this poem..really awesome...5/5.

This poem reminds me of my self. I enjoyed reading it but makes me sad to know that you feel the same way. My heart goes out to you.

Oh my goodness i love this poem!!
it's so0o0o0o0o great!
you are a great writer!

xoXOxo
Jenn

Really really good.

Aaaaaaaaaw.. hunnie!! you've got me to fend off all of those wittle voices. (i have them too) well, i care about you a lot so, please dont do what they tell you to do. I love you!!

psycho

I totally feel ya girl

Wow, thats so sad. i liked how you used the milkyway of sorrow. id like to know how you came up with that.

very well done, 5/5