I guess it doesn't help listening to a sad song while reading this, I'm crying over here Tiny D....Those last lines are just...heart breaking for me to read.....I'm so sorry this happened to you hun...thats like the worst feeling to go through! I want you to know though, don't let one bad egg spoil it for you. Don't allow him to ruin your thinking of a dream come true..Your still young how do you know this one was your dream? Don't give up girl, Fairy Tales might not be real all the time, but dreams, oh a dream can get you so far....Loved this poem! Feel better!
And you still have some touching up to do? That amazes me. Maybe I'm partially biased since I've loved your poems since the beginning, but I honestly don't see where anything needs to be changed. It's so bittersweet, though it is my firm belief that dreams really do come true-when it's the right one. I always feel as if you know me. Your poems are me. As always, truly incredible.
Awwwwwzz!! This is so beautiful!!! Wonderful poem I love it!! The story was a broken fairy tale and I pictured every detail in my mind. Gorgeous poem on all ends, no wonder you're on my favorites. keep it up!!! xxx
Wow.... thats all i can say. I could imagine every word of this poem as it came.. terrific job on your part. And by the way, you dont need to fix it up, its already one of my favorites Ive read so far! 5/5 Keep writing and take care..
I love your poem. I look around at my family and I see that there's only a few happy endings. I've come to realize that fairy tales are just that. They are make believe. Telling the little girls that you can fall in-love in an instant and live happily ever after. When in the real world you don't.