I really liked it, it's great! it explains about who we worship, who we follow, and what our religion is about (roughly). it really touched me... mashallah...
keep up the great work..
haya 3gab =]
I like your poem a lot, and I know I'm not the only one! I am a Christian, not a Muslim. But still, I think that all heart felt, inplacable faith is something of true beauty and value. This poem of yours holds something precious, so hold on to it.
This is a great poem. I know if I try to write a poem about being Muslim it'd turn out awful lol. Anyways I loved this poem, the flow was great, the short lines went great with it and the repetition in the beginning and the end were very good. Keep writing! 5/5