Intensity

by Natalie   Aug 23, 2006


Crinkled up sheets erasing tears,
Smudging stains upon her skin,
Blurry sight engulfing sad eyes,
Swallowing pain trapped within.

Solitude thoughts play her mind,
Remembering who she use to be,
Designed future now demolished,
Nothing left for the blind to see.

Courage leaps towards her faith,
Compelling strength to carry on,
Broken bones repair with words,
Simple things she knew all along.

August 23rd 2006
© Natalie.

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  • 17 years ago

    by - xoxrachellee.;

    This one just blew me away. Woww.

    5/5, definitely.

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    This is a really beautiful poem .
    The flow and rhymes are awesome .
    I love yur choice of words . Huge variety of vocab (:
    Love it lots .
    ..ღ__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Very good job! I loved it! your rhyming scheme was perfect and you didn't drag your point on and on. I really loved it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very profound.... your emotions and thoughts run deep

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl a touching piece. great use of words. xx

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