Okay, Before you read anything I say, you should know I'm like half asleep. seriously.
When I seen your little number next to your name showing you had a new poem, I thought it was the one for me, and then I went to see what it was, and it was a love poem, and I was like.. uh, that's not for me. and then I frowned. lol.. but then I read the poem and it was so sweet. lmao.
I loved the part where you tell her you love her and then she says it back. Awe. I wish I was in love, lol, it sounds like fun. taha!
The flow was really good though, and I liked the rhymes you used, aswell with the wording. It was beautiful, but I was just dissapointed that this wasn't the poem for meeeee. :[ Lol..
But yeah. Anyways, I tend to talk about crap when I'm half asleep. So yesh. Great poem SMAWCE brother! Keep it up. =D 5/5
Damn... I'm a bit lost for words for this piece. It blew my mind. The rhymes were just superb and the flow just kept me gripped. Your word choice was magnificent. The last stanza was out of this world. That last line was the perfect ending to a perfect piece. I'll have to go back and read it again now... Tchau! :)
Hey Darien, I really love this poem. I have sort of given up on love at this point, but it is really cool to see that you have not. I am a romantic all the same, so I was really touched by this poem. Was it about you and your girlfriend?
I got your message on CCP, do you still wanna talk? If you do, let me know. I am here for you. If you want to email me at firstname.lastname@example.org you are welcome to. I really hope you are okay. HUGS!
Amazing poem! Its so sweet! t he opening stanza captured me and the ednignw as like so perfect...well the whole poem was like awesome! i really did like this poem..the rhyme.. the flow they were all like so good! I loved it is all i can say! 5/5
Keep It up
I can't say anything except this was a delightful way to reenter the world of poetry it was beautiful and touching and . . . magnnificent! I'm here now yay!!!!!!!!!! I'll have to call you or something!
Awwwww! Darien, I loved this one. It was very catching and heartfelt. And I even said "AW!" Out-loud. Ha. It was very sweet, and I enjoyed it. It flowed very nicely, and was so so easy to read, love, and enjoy to it's fullest extent. I think this one was my favorite out of all three. Wonderfully done.