Comments : The Perfect Crime

  • 11 years ago

    by Natalie

    Okay, Before you read anything I say, you should know I'm like half asleep. seriously.

    When I seen your little number next to your name showing you had a new poem, I thought it was the one for me, and then I went to see what it was, and it was a love poem, and I was like.. uh, that's not for me. and then I frowned. lol.. but then I read the poem and it was so sweet. lmao.

    I loved the part where you tell her you love her and then she says it back. Awe. I wish I was in love, lol, it sounds like fun. taha!

    The flow was really good though, and I liked the rhymes you used, aswell with the wording. It was beautiful, but I was just dissapointed that this wasn't the poem for meeeee. :[ Lol..

    But yeah. Anyways, I tend to talk about crap when I'm half asleep. So yesh. Great poem SMAWCE brother! Keep it up. =D 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 11 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Damn... I'm a bit lost for words for this piece. It blew my mind. The rhymes were just superb and the flow just kept me gripped. Your word choice was magnificent. The last stanza was out of this world. That last line was the perfect ending to a perfect piece. I'll have to go back and read it again now... Tchau! :)

  • 11 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Wow, breathtaking poem. Great descriptions, very sweet poem...does it apply to you:)? lol Keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by Aussie

    Gr8 poem. it's cool the way u use words that no one does. i think it would be a good song:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Trampled Angel

    Hey Darien, I really love this poem. I have sort of given up on love at this point, but it is really cool to see that you have not. I am a romantic all the same, so I was really touched by this poem. Was it about you and your girlfriend?

    I got your message on CCP, do you still wanna talk? If you do, let me know. I am here for you. If you want to email me at ldsangelmikochan@earthlink.net you are welcome to. I really hope you are okay. HUGS!

    Tainted Miko

  • 11 years ago

    by Hind

    Ok this is the best so far...i love it...its just so sweet...

  • 11 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Awww, Darien! This is so beautful. I was completely riveted from the time I read the word to the last. The rhyming, the wording, the flow...perfect. I love this. I gotta read it again.

  • 11 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I'm not sure I liked this as much as everyone else but it was very well written. You had amazing flow and as always a wonderful choice of words. Great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 11 years ago

    by King of The Elements

    Great love scene i thought it was me about to do eveything you said i think its great *standing clapping*

  • 11 years ago

    by Samantha

    I don't even know where to start. I thought this poem was very sweet, and it was really touching. You did an awesome job with this one.

  • 11 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    I absolutely loved this poem. The title is misleading, thought there was going to be a sad ending. Very nice. Loretta

  • 11 years ago

    by Knee

    Darien, that was really awesome!
    I love the 3rd and the 4th stanzas...amazing poem =)

    your title was very inspiring concerning to a love poem !
    you did a great jog
    keep it up
    NemO xxxxxxxxx

  • 11 years ago

    by XxBloodxXxDreamsxX

    Wow..............Amazing.......No words could describe it..It is great 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Wonderful poem!!! I loved the title and the way you wrote it with such simplicity but it turned into a powerful masterpiece. Excellent work. Keep it up xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Tormented

    Hey!
    Amazing poem! Its so sweet! t he opening stanza captured me and the ednignw as like so perfect...well the whole poem was like awesome! i really did like this poem..the rhyme.. the flow they were all like so good! I loved it is all i can say! 5/5
    Keep It up
    And
    Keep Smiling

    -*-Tormented

  • 11 years ago

    by Just Lisa

    Hey! Aww that was soo cute! I loved it! Awesome job! It's a 5/5 for sure!
    *Just Lisa*

  • 11 years ago

    by Bhavin

    Dear Darien,

    A very beautiful poem penned by you. It was a PERFECT one. The moment I finished reading it I said "Wow! Its a perfect romantic poem" I guess its worth adding you to my favourites. Enjoy. 5/5.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kim

    I can't say anything except this was a delightful way to reenter the world of poetry it was beautiful and touching and . . . magnnificent! I'm here now yay!!!!!!!!!! I'll have to call you or something!

  • 11 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    -Blink-

    Awwwww! Darien, I loved this one. It was very catching and heartfelt. And I even said "AW!" Out-loud. Ha. It was very sweet, and I enjoyed it. It flowed very nicely, and was so so easy to read, love, and enjoy to it's fullest extent. I think this one was my favorite out of all three. Wonderfully done.

  • 11 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    OMG! This is perfect. Like, I love how your wrote this one, and how you made it so sweet, and beautiful. Darien you truly are talented. =]