I like this, its sweet and the rhym isn't forced in all like in other poems. The last stanza is an excellent finish. If my boyfriend wrote poems like you I would be in love forever. Nice job!

WOW, this is my favourite so far, i loved this one. 5/5

I love this poem. i have a myspace tooo...look up katelyn boudreau

WOW! What a beautiful poem. My jaw dropped at the conclusion! Just amazing!
Charisma*

I liked it, but it didn't have much of a rhythem or a flow. I liked the setting. 5/5

Wow, that was amazing. i love how you can relate crime and love, its so perfect. i loved it. beautiful. 5/5

Awww that was sooo cute! i loved it, i thought it had wonderful flow, and great vocab.... you do an exceptional job on your poems 5/5

OMG THAT WAS AMAZING IDK WHAT ELSE TO SAY!!!
~Liz