On the edge

by Hayley   Aug 23, 2006


Brushing past suicide with simplicity
Life is killing me
the devils begging me please
letting go would come with ease
when I'm trippin on the edge
of life and death
Death is the only thing
saving me now
struggling in so many ways
falling deeper into your tragedies
pain is the only thing I adore
I wont hold on anymore
Theres soo many past regrets
It would be so nice to forget

Hayley
Copyright 2006

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  • 16 years ago

    by BehindThisSmilex

    I love this one.
    your an amazing writter, honestly.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by KrypticKristen

    I really liked this one. It's very original, short, simple[yet complex], and flows really good. It was amazing. 5/5. remindes me why i love ur writing. I missed it, ahvent been on here in forever. But yah, ur work is still awesome.

  • 17 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    Yep.. it would i know how that feels but hang in there! keep writing awesome poems your still on my faves list from forever ago

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    This was real good...I liked the last two lines,
    ___

    Theres soo many past regrets
    It would be so nice to forget
    ___

    I can relate to this so much...good write! Keep it up!! Take care,

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