Wow.. very powerful, its a sad poem, that deals with a varies amount of emotion, but you wrote it well, great write 5/5.. I hope this isnt about you.. if it is im sorry to hear it.. and i know you will be fine.. like it says at the end.. you made it without him :) ..
Best Wishes..
Please Rate And Comment On My Poems, Thanks..
Kirsty Palmer xXx

The poem is sad but expresses itself well. The things I would suggest though is limiting the exclaimtion(sp) points to one. You want to shout but not scream it. And maybe uppercase the i's. Other than that, it was a decent poem showing strength in the final lines.

Powerfully expressive peice. I agree with Kaylee about the explanation marks, 3 is really the upper limit any more are simply un-needed. arn't usless fathers great? mine was there, but still was never what you would think of as a father, so I can't truly relate to your peice but you express it with such power that you really conveyed your feelings.
very well written overall, short but extremely expressive

I liked this poem hon. it has great emotion. Keep writing

Omg this is so sad sry

It's a very good poem. I liked it alot. keep it up.

Heh, this reminds me of my poem in a way. Very sad Dear. Good job.

Tahts so sad:( i liked it a lot...
but trust me its better not have a father at all than have one like mine, who cheates on my mom...
so concider yourself lucky....

Very emotional and expressive. I can understand your hurt and deep thoughts as I was reading. Great job. Your ending confidence was a good finish! Keep it up. xxx

Oh it is so sad.
you showed your true feelings in this poem that every reader can feel the pain.
great poem, and I hope things are going fine with you.
take care.5/5

Im crying of how sad....its the sam ething that happends with me...and that supposly guy named my "dad"

Awh, that was so sad hunny.. I think the flow and the whole poem would benefit if you put it into more of a poetry format.. Instead of one big paragraph.. Other than that, it was an amazing poem.. The emotion was so clear and powerful and the rhymes all worked well.. Nicely done! 5/5

Thats another nice poem! more like a letter than a poem! but yet very good wriiten!

sometimes father arent that nice, but always keep ur head up!

Yet again, a very good venting poem, but I didn't like the broken format; it just ruins your talent.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

Now that's a poem with power. I can feel the anger and disappointment with your choice of words. Very well written. Keep up the good work!

Very strong poem. Great show of independence. I hope things will be better for you.

I hate this kind of fathers,goddamn them,your poem is great
Keep it up
See ya
Laura