Wow i think thats one of ur best ever, u are amazing at this...idk wuts been going on with u lately but if anythings wrong then good luck and god bless....awesome poem!
love ya lots,
sore

p.s. sumer breack made me stopid....

I love your descriptions. And especially this line:
I'm already dead, the reaper's just late

Some of your lines are bumpy because they are a bit longer than the ones before, it interrupts the flow but you still tell a good story with your words. Great job.

I love the energy and the words..amamzing stuff. Your style is so unique..excellent metaphors and a great vibe. I lvoe it..excellent jobb buddy.

lissa