Comments : A Response to "Looking at the Moon...I saw your Face

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenie

    Wow!! u have a LOT of talent in ur words!! i went to the "amazon.com" thing..i saw on ur profile...very nice :D
    keep up the great work!

    thank u for ur comment
    :D
    made my night waaay better

    jenie

  • 11 years ago

    by Darien

    Awww, that was a sweet poem. I know what it's like to miss someone that much. That was a really good poem my friend. Keep on writing!

  • Iam speechless...i have been reading this poem for the last hour and still i want to read it over and over..........if word could come i would tell u how much this means to me..........its beautiful..beyond anything else goran..but i never thought of it..i mean i truelly never thought...thank you so much for everything...for ur wonderful comments for u always being there...for ur friendship...for sharing this wonderful works of yours...i have never known anyone in my life like u and i believe i will never know another one...u r a gift from above..and who ever readys ur works would know wat i mean....
    GBY.

  • 11 years ago

    by mrhope

    Another emotional poem, I dont know what poem you have responded but whatever it is, you have done a great job writing about a night in your life.
    I wish I could write like you,
    I wish I could explain my feelings like you do.
    your poems are so great and this person is so lucky who got your love.

  • 11 years ago

    by WordsHurt

    I agree this poem is awesome! You put your felings together so well! I loved it! I wish i could write like you too..The person you wrote it for is very lucky to have you as a friend!5/5

    Take Care
    And
    Keep Writing

    Much Love
    A.Pathetic.Mistake

  • 11 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Wow! dat was so sweet! gr8 job done dear.....i hav written one poem onnight. try to read that. i hope u will kove dat.
    and ya thanx a lot for ur sweet comments.

    take care

  • 11 years ago

    by Sondos

    This is beauty and talent beyond belief. Incredible the way you have written this and made it so incredible, it gives me tingles!

  • 11 years ago

    by desigirl

    Again i am speechless facing your words and thoughts.
    I must admit it, now when I read your love poem I see everything as love in my own daily life, and IN PAST, when you use to write sad poems I use to cry all the time and from that I know I have fallen in love with your words.
    This poem was another great move by the best writer.
    keep up the great work and keep writing more because I do check your page at least ten times a day to read a new one.

  • 11 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I liked the topic and the thought of the poem, but your format and flow was broken, in my opinion. But nonetheless it was very good.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 11 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Thts sooo sad...i luved it a 5/5 for me!! keep on writing!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Awww, this is such a beautiful poem. It is so powerful and emotional in it's own ways. Wonderful as always. keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Awhe Goran that was really sweet and so well written. I really really loved it.

  • 11 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Very beautiful write. I think this is one of your best. Great flow.
    always Loretta

  • 11 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Hey wonderful poem....very friendly...oh thankyou so much for my new poem....that poem took me 2mintues to write...i was just thinkin how i really felt and it all came out on paper...i wana get it published along wit sum of my other poems...hopefully i can :) 5/5 cant wait to read more of your poems :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    First this poem was better than I thought it was. Yes it did have a romantic feel even though it is a friendship poem, and yes he feelings cmae over the reader making this one of the top friendship poems I've read on the site. However, I would suggest fixing up some of your tense changes that switch from present to past.

  • 11 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    I think there are a few little things you can do to brush this poem up some more.

    Firsty I'd edit the first stanza to fall in line with the second and third.

    In my dream I will see you.

    Grammatical error.

    In my dream I would see you.

    (the poem is told in past tense and should follow it through out.)

    I would swap the last two stanzas to give the poem a stronger and more final ending. Also I would change "When I was there near you." to When I was there with you. With is so much more personal than you and gives a higher sense of intimacy.

    Not bad at all.

  • 11 years ago

    by Tormented

    Hey! Mr. Goran! how r u?
    Well i love this poem...i can relate a bit of it! The opening stanza was like awesome! it really did capture me! and the ending was like so perfect!well the whole poem was like amazing! im sure alot of people can relate to this! very well written!
    Well done on a great job!
    Keep smiling
    And
    Keep writing

    -*-Tormented

  • 11 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Yes It is a response to a poem that a special person wrote it for me,

  • 11 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Aww that was such a nice poem. It has a nice meaning. keep it up. Your very good at making poems.

  • 11 years ago

    by Heather

    I thought this was a very good poem. For the most part the flow was excellent and I thought it was a very emotional and well written poem. I loved it a lot, and thought it was a great topic and just a great poem overall.
    5/5