Pretty good, the first line was creative but the connection to the rest of the poem was a little confusing. Maybe you could describe that theme more. Keep it up!

Nice Poem, I thougth the flow was a bit rough and stated before a few Grammatical errors but other then that i thought this poem was excellent! It seemed to have a lot of meaning to it! I especially loved this stanza:

“That night,
Many times I tried to sleep
But could not , and realized
How much I miss you.
I wanted to sleep just because
I was sure
In my dream I will see you.”

I thought that stanza was just adorable!! Well done 5/5!!

Thanks all of you who made this poem more special to me, and a special thanks for the special person behind this poem.

This was pretty good.. But you did use the word "I" a lot! Try and use other words to avoid using "I, she, he", it makes the poem sound a lot better.. The descripitons were pretty good.. You have good ideas but I think that you could present them better.. Nice job though 4/5

BeautifulPoem, It has a certain feeling in it that catches my attention..
well done 6/5..

The poem was fantastic! the person is very fortunate n lucky to have you writing this for her. =D

thanks for your comment.

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Nice poem.. i really liked it...keep up the good write..comment on my poem "what kind of father are you "thanks

Og god, it is been some days i was not here and you are in first page again, congrates.
this poem was another great one by you, it is full of emotions and a very deep poem.
I hope the person who you wrote for will like it, cause it is so great.
take care and keep in touch, and i forgot to tell you i am posting my new poem soon.

Well you know my feelings already so why waste my time??
So i am not leaving any comment here.lol.

joking,
well done MR.Goran
well done

Fantastic! Wow!

The start captured the reader and put them into the mood of what you were tlaking about.
It made an image of a strong bond between two people that was somehow broken.
You addressed the issue very well.

The ending was very straight forward and it gave a sense of knowing that this one person was very important.

5/5

Its a great piece and I think your writing shall conitnue to be great if it stays this way.
~Wings

Thats relly good 5/5

A very touching poem. I liked the ending stanza it closed it off well. Thanks for sharing.

That is so deep and in your poem i can feel the need of that one person

Wow i loved this poem!

i loved the part you wrote:

"The moment you were looking at the moon,
I was in a lonely room:
Writing another poem for you."

the words here was flowing sooo well!
the emotions were strong too!

Keep it up!

Awh! Wow. This was kinda sad. Good though. I loved the ending the most. It was great! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Aww I have been there many times, just wanting to sleep to be near the One I love and miss in my dreams.. You are a very talented poet.. keep up the good work xx

Blessed you for friendship long And blessed by friendship near. If your souls apart; are meant to stay, It's your past, i believe that you... will hold so dear. beautiful penned once again goran, nice tribute to a friend...well done!

Awwww...thts so sad.....a 5/5 for me..

This is good!! 5/5!