Well done Nat, this was a very well written poem. Like I've been saying, even though you don't know the proper names of the literary devices, you use them well. OHhh man, that sounds so confusing haha. The last line was an odd one for me. I mean it works well with the title, but I don't see it much as an ending line. I don't know, it could be me!.. lol
Well, this was a great poem, and you are becoming a very good poet. I really wish I started writing when I was younger, I would have matured alot. But I do see my poetry slowly changing. Awesome poem SMAWCE sister!!!..
Wow Excellent poem girl. I liked the way you you rhymed the last two lines in each stanza, that really put your poem to the next level despite all the descriptive words you used that took it too the top. The flow was faultless and there is nothing negative I can possibly say about this poem. [5/5]
Aah... Its too good. I dont like writing long comments like an essay but I wanna tell you that a best poet is the one that touches the heart of a reader through her/his poems and you have succeeded in doing so. Bravo!