Wow! from the beginning to the end, great. great rhythm, great perception, great job.

Beautifully done, the flow and content was amazing! Excellent piece...

Fantastic! From start to finish, you have exceeded yourself. Truly, well done. xx

I really, really, like this. It shows the life and thoughts of a poet and how he/she views things. Often they are more beautiful than what they look, or rather as I like to think, they are what they appear to truly be to poets, yet non-poets just don't appreciate them enough.. if that makes sense lol. Anwyays, take care!

God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

I really enjoyed this poem, you managed to give life to those words ...
and the idea on which it is based is lovely . keep up the good work :)

You seem to be outdoing yourself with each piece of work here!
Mere words are said to tantalize
A vision or a dream
But Poetry in Motion
Completes the scheme of things.

I think you just beautifully summed up what life must be: poetry in motion.

outstanding, my friend.
peace
shobhana

Beautiful.

5/5

Sweet, i like it :P ... lol but the flow at some points was a little shaky

Sweet, i like it :P ... lol but the flow at some points was a little shaky

Once again, pure talent. I love this one too! (suprise suprise, : ) Again, it puts you right there and I love that! Keep it up!
~Midnight Sun

Beautiful look at things through a poet's eyes!