Now I Go Away

by ~DaYiS~   Aug 24, 2006


Here you go again
telling me what to do
now you are mad at me
because i didn't listed to you

Am not a little girl anymore
am a teenager now
even though i still lobe you
I'll have to fly away and explore

You're my daddy, i know
but you have to understand
that you'll have to trust me once
because now i go away.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    AWWWW
    Cute poem!
    But there was one typo
    "still i lobe you"
    to
    "still I LOVE you"
    But other then that great poem
    One suggestion tho i think you
    should put more emotion in it!
    Its still good as it is :)
    Nice read
    Keep it up!
    And
    Keep Smiling
    5/5

    Much Love
    -*-Tormented

  • 17 years ago

    by HumanAngel

    Good job with this poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by HEATHER

    Good ;-} i gave u a 5/5....good job keep writin... vote and commet mine if you got a chance...thanks...heather

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