Good ;-} i gave u a 5/5....good job keep writin... vote and commet mine if you got a chance...thanks...heather

Good job with this poem!

AWWWW
Cute poem!
But there was one typo
"still i lobe you"
to
"still I LOVE you"
But other then that great poem
One suggestion tho i think you
should put more emotion in it!
Its still good as it is :)
Nice read
Keep it up!
And
Keep Smiling
5/5

Much Love
-*-Tormented