My Day Of Woe

by Kirsty palmer   Aug 29, 2006


My day of worry all started when I stood up straight
My head felt dizzy, and I was in a state
The room went dark, nothing but black,
There was an event starting that I couldn't hack
Standing still breathing deeply, trying to calm myself
Frantically shaking, worrying about my health
I head out of the enclosed space heading to the bedroom
Feeling scared, like a baby's first time from the mother's womb
I stagger across the hall, still not able to see a thing
Thinking the room will be safer- how wrong could I have been?
I was now in the bedroom- how? I do now know
I loose my balance and my head takes a blow,
I fall and bash my head on the edge of the bed
Lying in a lump on the floor-feeling oh so dead
No longer than a minute I came back around
Having no real memory of what had been found
All I remember is feeling so sick and weak
The feeling to me is so dreadful and unique
I was taken to the bathroom, where I was soon to be sick
There wasn't much there, and was over very quick
After having some water I stood up once more
I must have fainted again, as I came round on the floor
What was happening to me? I do now know, I couldn't take it in
I felt as if there was something ripping from within
I was taken to the bedroom where I was sat but still shaking
My head hurts, and my body was aching
I was made a sweet tea, and was being asked questions
People trying to help with all their suggestions
How could me- just a child of fifteen
Recover from what you have just seen?
Three forced bashes straight to my head
And yet im still here- im still not dead
A loss of memory that I will never recall
All because of that almighty fall
I only seized help from my one true friend
If not for him it would have been the end
Still I have to go from tests after tests
Living on worry, with plenty of rest,
Im bruised on my head, cut, bleeding and sore
But I thank my boyfriend, for it could have been more
I managed to live past my day of woe
But I will never forget how though!
Im at home today, waiting for my blood tests to arrive
Remembering that I am lucky to survive

** This Poem Is based On Me, And Is Sadly True, On Sunday 26th August I Faitned Twice, Banging My Head Three Times, I Had A Blackout, And Do Not Remember Some Of The Events.**

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  • 16 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    That is such a scary situation and i'm sorry you had to go through that... but this poem is very good... and you are very talented to write it... Great work... imagery is great and very sad :'( keep writing alwaysss <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Colourful Mind

    Im so sorry to here u was unwel but very good writing

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Great poem. Sry that happened to you, but you really relayed the emotions and the events well. it gave me goosebumps... great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by lexy

    Sorry this happened to u, but i love ur poems they keep me hypnotized like a story. Good work ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by N3v3r N3w Lov3 Sucks

    This is a good poem and Its a good way that u showed the emotions of this poems!!