Heartache

by sarah   Aug 29, 2006


Sunset and I see your face,
My heart beats at a fast pace,
Your lustrous hair,
Your face so fair,
Breaks my heart until it tears,

Her arms around you like a snake,
Brings my tears to fill a lake,
The aching longing,
The carefree faking,
Splits my soul with no belonging,

Moonlight the brightening light,
Illuminates the fearful sight,
Her kiss so sweet,
Her lips divine,
Steals the man who should be mine

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    Love the opening line - "sunset and i see his face" great poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by rita

    Great poem loved it

  • 17 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    Hey you are so good! Thank you so much for commenting on my poem it means so much to me!
    Burning~Wings

  • 17 years ago

    by stefanie

    I like this one. i like the way you brought all those detailed feelings into this poem. great job :) and thank you for the comment.

  • 17 years ago

    by Erica Jovie©

    Right on sista! i know what it is like to have some girl all over the one you love so don't loose hope and keep writing!! God bless -erica

Read All Comments (10)

More Poems By sarah