Hear my call

by *Isolde*   Aug 29, 2006


Help me god
help me here
my mother beats me
And I shed a tear.

I don't want to be here
it gives me much fear
it makes me feel like
this is gonna be another year

When I wake up tomorrow
I hope I'm not here
in this place
being chased

Ill close my eyes
while I wait for my prize
and I hope I'm not here
when the sun arrives.

*p.s : I'm not going through this with my mom. lol

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kristina

    If you liked my poem then why did you give it a low rating?!

  • 16 years ago

    by sheila

    Love this poem !

    * $heila *

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    For a 13 year old, this was good, i mean, i liked it, but it wasnt the best because of your age, you need some more experience in life, but keep writing cos you do have talent
    xxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Definitely one of your better poems, nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rona

    I'm glad you don't go through this with your mom. This is sad, but real great.
    5/5

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