Good job. I like this one =] keep up the good work kid.

CRAZY GOOD! you're awesome!
keep up the good work!
It's really GOOD!
haha
Christina!

Wow.. im so sorry to hear about yourloss, and i hope you and your friends are ok, you wrote this poem amazingly ythough.. and it is good that you are getting it yout of your sistom!
Best Wishes..
Could You Please rate and comment on my poems, Thanks..
Kirsty Palmer xXx

Nice poemm i really like it..5.5

I liked this one. Good luck with everything. Nice emotion and flow. =)

-Jennifer. Overall Rating: 4.5/5

My gosh, this is such a sad poem. great choice of words, flow is good, excellent piece, 5/5. so full of emotion.

keep writing, u have talent
xxx