Comments : I watched you disappear

  • 17 years ago

    by perfectly unperfect

    It was so sad i loved it

  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Awesome piece of poetry. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Lokesh Vashishth

    Lovely poetry dear.. nice, short and meaningful...

    keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by ShootingStar179

    That was amazing. I am truly bedazzled that a poem so short could be so sweet. I hope you were not so beautifully broken as the poem implies. By the way, I could always use a friend if you want one (I saw your topic)

    - Courtney

  • 16 years ago

    by Tate LaBianca

    Wow. Beautiful, darling, truly. I loved it! 5/5