Comments : Execution

  • 17 years ago

    by President Dead

    I'm on my psp right now, so i'll come bak later and write a good comment.

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Not as good as your previous work to be honest.
    It's a different style, I liek it.
    But I love ur other pieces.
    ~Emma
    xxoo

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Oh this is a wonderful write! It is different, and a simple but powerful write. These are the types of poems I love, that could make the reader so lured into such a small masterpiece!

  • 17 years ago

    by President Dead

    I really like this poem,
    It flows really well,
    And has a simple, yet great rhythm.
    The imagery created when i read this is incredible,
    No matter what anyone says this is a very good poem, up there with your best, and i like it cos it's different.
    You've expressed yourself, that's all that matters.
    love ya

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    Good choice of words
    Though I would not agree on some line,that makes confusion.
    5/5

    God Bless!

  • 17 years ago

    by X2892

    Very good poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    This is a great poem. Though some
    of the lines are confussing. But I like
    the style of it. It's different and I
    believe with just a bit of editing it can
    be perfect. 5/5

    Great Job
    Letty

  • 17 years ago

    by Aussie

    WOW, really deep. i like ur taste:)