Wonderful poem. Sad a bit. It was very descriptive and I understood it after I read it a couple times :P. It had a good flow too and I liked how you put what he said at the end of it, that was different and a nice touch to the poem. [5/5]. Take care!

Hmm. very interesting
It makes me read twice.I like poems in this style, and the choice of words is good.
Job well done!

God Bless

Oh my god.. I love this... absolutely love it.. Amazing! Brillant! Well thought out... Just wow. You never cease to amaze me. Great, great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Oh my god.. I love this... absolutely love it.. Amazing! Brillant! Well thought out... Just wow. You never cease to amaze me. Great, great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Uh-maze-ing.

i love it. i love you. i love cheese.

er.. yeah. haha

keep up the awesome work!

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Nicce onne

Right, I liked it alot, it may not have rhymed but rhyming is not what is important. The message is, and the message is lovely. Great job. And it wasn't to difficult to understand. :)

Beuatiful poem!!! I enjoyed it alot...keep upthe good writting

Very deep and abstract way of writing about love. How sweet, i didn't know you had someone already..lol

Nice way to write..i like

Awhhh, that is so sweeet! The only part I found a little bit awkward was the last line.. Other than that, the rest of it flowed really well... The descriptions were beautiful and I am so glad you've found someone special Taleee.. Wonderfully done, it made me smilee, Ily! 5/5

I love this poem..its crazy true...

Crybaby*

Haha i like it!! its not restricted to any rhyming what so ever which grabs my attention.. its so straight from the heart! keep writing!

~angel~

Aw That was like GREAT i absolutely LOVED IT! I really do...i dont know wot to say im like speechless! it flowed so well and it was very descriptive! oh Gosh i just L.O.V.E.D I.T!! 5/5!
Take Care
And
Keep Smiling

Much Love
-*-Tormented

This poem i can tell seems something strong!

This poem has strong feelings in it!
it flowed well!
and it is well wriiten loved it

keep it up!

I absolutely loved it... SO TRUE!

Lovely poem =). Its great it made me think into it to understand, and i love it when writers make me do that. =)

Love your work, well done!!!

Awe! That was so cute! It made me smile lol. And I really loved the ending, all the poems of yours that I have read I have really loved! Keep up the good work. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.