Comments : The kiss

  • 17 years ago

    by GraCiE

    I think your poem is really sweet and it really sums up the feeling of when you want someone you like so much to kiss you. i know how it feels, so i relate to your poem really well!! i really like it!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by melissa

    Wow i really like this poem...its really good. Kepp up the awesome work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melly

    It was really good, I loved it!

    Bye.

  • 17 years ago

    by braydens1mommy

    I liked it. Great work! I can totally relate to it.

    Later

  • 17 years ago

    by Kylie

    Wow, I really like this poem a lot. You put that feeling into words so well =) and that isn't always easy. Great job!

    x.xBrokenx.x

  • 17 years ago

    by wild angel

    Wow thats good so cute.. aww... happiness lol
    well bye

  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Kay so once again no vote sorry anyway so yeah! i llllovvvee thissss one !! keep it up chicky

  • 17 years ago

    by Doesnt matter

    I rewrote the ending

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    Aww

    His lips are at my ears
    And and im going out of my mind
    He whispers "I Love You"
    for the very first time

    i love this!

    Narc xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Becca,
    This is a beautiful poem. Excellent job! Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Great poem! It had a lot of feeling in it. well written! 5/5

    marcella