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by Natalie Sep 6, 2006
Sadness, depression /
Hushed secrets cached beneath septic skin,
Anemic bones tormented from pain within,
Enhanced nerves tremble blood streams,
Tarnished tears gush upon open wounds,
Chaotic mindset awoke believable dreams.
Isolated visions engulfed muzzled thoughts,
Taped skeletal frames escaped triple knots,
Languished emotions controlled innocence,
Injected fears revealed unknown past scars,
Chaotic mindset hushed in complete silence.
Narcotic fumes consumed troubled airways,
Fainting portraits stood strong on displays,
Collapsed future stared fear into the eyes,
Regretful memories flashed beyond lights,
Chaotic mindset prayed for final goodbyes.
7th September 2006
Copyright (C) Natalie.
by - xoxrachellee.;
Wow. I shouldn't even start on how this one was awesome. I just think this poem was meant to be read aloud to an audience...
by Simple Sensation
Wow!! Man i love the words you use in these poems! Brilliant! Nice rhyme sceme, and i love the flow of it! So much emotian in these words. Its just... WOW! Keep writing!
Awesome write! Kepp it up!
Love the words you used in this. you've been using a lot of big words lately =] i like it. amazing job on this. the flow was great! the poem was really sad. and i love sad poems. great job. 5/5
I loved this honey. this was amazing. I wish I could write like you =( grr. i love your useage of vocabulary. one day you have to teach me these big words. lol
but other then that this was amazing. just like all the other ones you have written. i love you sweetie