Comments : Love Knot

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Great job. Very original details. I liked the second stanza. very deep

  • 17 years ago

    by Aussie

    Gr8 poem. had lots of emotions. it was deep. keep writing:)

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    It kind of confused me? I loved the images that you created in your words. But the flow could use a little bit of work, nto much just one or two lines. It was a great poem overall though. 4/5 =]

    -Jenna.

  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    This poem was kind of confusing at
    first but as I read on I got the meaning
    you used the right kind of words to help the reader use his or her imagination. But I think the flow is
    kind of off. I loved it don't get me
    wrong. I just think you should patch
    things up a little to make it perfect.
    I still give you a 5/5 because as I said
    its great, but it needs a small touch up

    Love
    Letty

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow. I really liked this. I loved the "used-by-date" line it was the best line in the poem. good work, your writing is lovely. 5/5