Wow that is so sorrowful.. it was wondersul to read!! 5/5 plz write more like this!

I really like this poem!

I thought that it was absolutely awesome, so strong, powerful. It flowed beautifully and was absolutely perfect.
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"Slowly moving the black pen across the paper
The words that choke my insides are finally free" - WOW

Hunn, this was amazing!! Each line made me swell with adoration. You are doing such a fantastic job, it's great to see you writing so well! Keep it up darling.

Love Sarah-Joy

Wow! Excellent poem. So much emotion put into it. The rhyming and flow was great from start to finish. && I really loved your choice of words, they was extremely descriptive. [5/5] Wonderful Job.

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Woah thats amazing hun! Very deep and powerful. Your use of words is just wonderful. This is an excellent poem. Definately one of my favorites of yours! Keep it up! Can't wait to read more! =] 5/5

Wow.. this is very interesting poem.. i havent tried any poems like this one.. it is very well written and your stanzas flew wonderfully.. it is very emotional also... great job!!

Good work jess. lovely poem!

keep up the good work

Bravo. Excellently done. The flow was a bit off at times but overall a wonderful write.

Wow.......this poem is soo awsome!! a 5/5 for me..