Comments : You took my soul!

  • 11 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Awe.. wow. This is short, but completely brilliant. I loved it and there's nothing more to say. Great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 11 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    Short and to the point. Very nice. The first stanza is kind of weak, but the second is very powerful and makes up for it. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    You are so great in how u express ur true feelings, i like ur all poems

  • 11 years ago

    by Tammie

    For such a short poem, you did an amazing job. Deciet is painful. Keep up the great work. =]

  • 11 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Wow!! such a short sharp poem... yet so strong and meaningful!!
    well done keep writing!

    Love
    Jacs
    xxxx

  • 11 years ago

    by jello

    Short and to the point...this is a good poem. very well written
    good job

  • 11 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    Short and sweet, Some of the best, I think. Nicely done.

  • 11 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Amazing! I love it!! Its short but its good! really good! Keep writing! xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Chloe [*]

    Aww Wow..

    Good Job Love..
    This was Very MeaningFul.. thank you.

    XoxO..

  • 10 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Awesome poem! Alot of emotion here--- My only suggestion is to change the last line. I look forward to more poems like this one!

    xxEvilAngelxx

  • 10 years ago

    by amelia

    Excellent work
    good start... u shud write more...
    nice rhymes...

    pls vote & comment on
    dear sir
    murder or suicide

    thanks
    love
    amy

  • 10 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This poem is so short but it's right to the point and it's so true excellent job 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this!
    So short, but again so much meanign and emotion.

  • 10 years ago

    by Rona

    Short, but well written! Good one!

  • 10 years ago

    by Megadrive

    This is a powerful poem.... with alot of emotion, I just wish it was longer, to give me more of an idea of why you feel this way, what made you feel this way... just something more to paint a larger picture for me... Cause I feel I'm not getting enough information=( but of course that maybe the point your going through, I dont know. It was really good for what was here lol=) So keep it up=D

  • 10 years ago

    by Boogie

    Damn! i can soo relate to that!! its amazing!!

    short yet powerful..and full of meaning !

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by paul alexander

    Very sad i like it

  • 10 years ago

    by Sarah

    Yeah..I kno right..but I am shy..lol

  • 8 years ago

    by NiQk

    It keeps me wondering... I like it, what happened?

  • 8 years ago

    by NiQk

    It keeps me wondering... I like it, what happened?