This is a fantastic poem. It is trufully one of the best poems I have read for a long time. I can't quite describe what makes it so amazing; I think it's just your brilliant use of vocad and language. It's beatifully written and everything about it is great!
About the title.... This poem needs a very good title; and I'm not sure I can think of one suitably superb! My only suggestion is 'Fixation', but I don't think that's quite right. Well done on your brilliant poem! 5/5
Imi
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I really liked this poem!! n a suggestion for your title could be 'The World' you might think it's lame but it's the best i could come up with!!

Nice poem, 5/5
keep it up

Amazing... poem... !!! love the bigwords.. it really adds to the poem.. this poem so well thought out.. it just sounds perfect..

You have an amazing vocabulary. everything in this poem flowed and it kept me at the end of my seat. i wanted more when i finished this! 5/5

You have excellent vocabulary and I love your use of words. It kept me reading. Wonderfully done. :]
5/5 Thanks for all the comments. :]

Chelsey