Very clear message, except for one part in the last stanza that kind of confuses me. Straightforward, though, for sure. You said what you meant, 5/5.

Oh, by the way, there's a typo in the fifth line.

I have rated this 5/5. I know exactly how you feel and I'm sure quite a few people can relate to this. Great write!

Dearest,
Brit

Hm. Though it was short you got your message across. And the emotions were raw, and that was good. Keep it up!

Natalie``

You seem to be very good at writing dark and sad poetry, just like me.
Keep up the good work.

Hehe noone has noticed the secret leave me alone thing at the side :o

I can realate to this....sorta....but it seemed lik u put the words tht i felt in my mouth....awsome! 5/5 for me!!

Nice poem..