That's really sad. I almost lost my own brother this weekend, he was drinking and driving with buddies. I can't imagine what I would have done if he had died. I'm really sorry for your loss, and I'm glad you found a way to let out your emotion. This was a sweet write. :)
This is very touching , sincere and heartfelt.Sometimes poetry helps us express emotions that are so deep in the heart and need to be expressed.A sort of healing and catharsis.This is an excellent poem, nice flow, but it is the emotion and sentiment that make it shine.
=) i dont know how can i thank u all guys for appreciating this poem of mine.. well thanks a lot i honestly love ur comments it gives me some lessons,and u are also courage me to move on and on despite of the sorrow i had just now.. well actually i really dont know when i can be totally move on so far, coz still the memories what my brother's left... its too hard to let go away. well again thank u so so much deep in my heart. ilove u and god bless u all