Aww I'm sorry for your loss i just r ecently lost my ex boyfriend and it hurts like hell, your poem is good keep writing,

That's really sad. I almost lost my own brother this weekend, he was drinking and driving with buddies. I can't imagine what I would have done if he had died. I'm really sorry for your loss, and I'm glad you found a way to let out your emotion. This was a sweet write. :)

This is very touching , sincere and heartfelt.Sometimes poetry helps us express emotions that are so deep in the heart and need to be expressed.A sort of healing and catharsis.This is an excellent poem, nice flow, but it is the emotion and sentiment that make it shine.

Peace, Poetry, & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Thank you guys for appreaciating my poems.. from the button im my heart i am really glad to hear that from u guys fot the nice compliment of my p oem. may god bless u always

Touching poem. Im very sorry for your loss. I hope that writing about it has given you some comfort.

Wow this was very great 5/5

Sorry to hear of your lose, I hope things will get better!!
Good job on the writing I loved it.

-Thanks for you c/r

-Josiah

That was very nice I can feel the emotion put it into it it had a nice flow 5/5

Aww that was sweet. He'd really appreciate you doing this for him .. I'm sorry about his death, but, life does go on. Other than that, the poem was really well written. Great job :)

Take care.

That was very well written, I loved the emotion and flow you put toward this piece of work. NICE JOB!

It seems like it could almost be made a song. good poem and thanks for the comment.

I felt sorry for your brother and yeah this poem was great i feel the sadness when i read this poem, because i can relate to this and because we are both filipino and by the words you use..

great piece comes from a heart of a poet and this is one of them

Great job

Geneross

This is a very beautifully written,
touching poem. The flow was a bit on
the rocky side, but I'm willing to
over-look that because of the love
that you put into it. This was truly
an excellen job. 5/5

Love
Letty

Wow..beautiful.

I am very sorry for your loss sweetheart, im sure hes become your guardian angel :)... Your poem was so heart-felt & you put so much feeling into it its beautiful.

:( sorry about your brother, who died! i am sure God needed him for something much bigger than life on earth!

keep it up!

I know exactly how u feel. this poem was very emotional and it had its own lil flow to it that at first i didnt see but then it struck me. good job!

Awwww that was well writtin...keep up with the writting..please comment and rate my poems..thanks...~DARK~

Awww this one really touched my heart, nicely written and the fact I can relate to losing a brother really made it more special. Thanx for a good read. *5/5* effort.
Karms.

=) i dont know how can i thank u all guys for appreciating this poem of mine.. well thanks a lot i honestly love ur comments it gives me some lessons,and u are also courage me to move on and on despite of the sorrow i had just now.. well actually i really dont know when i can be totally move on so far, coz still the memories what my brother's left... its too hard to let go away. well again thank u so so much deep in my heart. ilove u and god bless u all

= )sweet lig