Aw wow. I'm really sorry for your loss. I loved this poem alot though, cos I can relate heaps. My younger passed away a long time ago, so yeah.

You put alot of emotions into this piece, and you're very brave for posting it. Keep it up!

Natalie``

5/5 this poem is great sorry about your brother. brother sister relationship is important my brother is the world to me so i understand thanks for your comment.

I can't say that i know what u are going thru but I do feel for u. I feel your poem says it all. Full of meaning and straight from your heart. Memories are all you have don't ever let the good ones go. I like the way you express your self, you will find the more you talk and write about your sadness the easier it becomes to deal with.

I lost a boyfriend to suicide a few years ago, I blamed myself. He walked infront of a train. Ppl told me i needed counselling but i refused and started talking to ppl i knew sharing my experience with anyone who wanted to listen. The worse effect it has had on me is that i cannot catch trains.

I know just how much it hurts to lose somebody ever so dear to you. this poem was touching, and it brought many tears my eyes...
hang in there,
and God took him off Earth for a reason.

Great poem. stay positive and keep moving foward.

What you write is, without a doubt, true and siscere! Life is certianly no piece of cake, but the noble pure hearted carry on no matter what! May God shine His grace and glory on the rest of your days. ps thank you for reading my poems.

Amazing poem, so sad tho, great rite. i hope you can move on... although you will never forget your brother the pain will become less.

Again well done

Love
Jacs
xxxx

I loved your poem 5/5 thank you for sharing your talent!

Sorry for your loss... this was a good poem... i could really feel all your emotions... it was truly heartfelt... im sure he would've loved it too... keep writing and don't forget to smile :)

~angel~

Aww I'm so sorry for your loss. I felt the 'emotion' in the poem.. its really sad but its beautiful :) anyway thanks for the comment TC :)

*Pinoy ka ba?*

Wow so sad what can i say other then it was a great poem

Very Sad to hear about your brother. You wrote a very great poem about him though. And I bet hes lookin down on you now watching over. God bless you and wish you the best

Wow, that was sad. I'm nearly crying.
Wonderful job on the poem.
The flow was great and the emotion was great.
I'm sorry for your lose.
5/5

|Sarah|

This was so heartbreaking..and yet still so beautifully written.
The emotion and depth scream through the words in this.
The imagery used created vivid pictures and the flow was good throughout.
You did a great job with this, and I'm sorry for your loss.

I'm sorry to hear about your loss. God bless. I'm sure hes looking over youw now. This poem was lovely an amazing tribute to im sure an amazing person. Well done with this 5/5~mel

Very sad and moving, sorry for your loss.Steve

Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

This is very touching.
I'm sorry to hear about your brother.
Now, I have nothing really to say about it, the repition kind of worked for this poem.
So, nicely done.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

Is this poem based on your own experience? Good! Continue writing poems.