It is good, and enjoyable but the form is more like writing a novel than a poem, but it is great. and yeah, you are already in my favorite list just because I really enjoy your poetry. you are a great writer.

It is good, and enjoyable but the form is more like writing a novel than a poem, but it is great. and yeah, you are already in my favorite list just because I really enjoy your poetry. you are a great writer.

It is good, and enjoyable but the form is more like writing a novel than a poem, but it is great. and yeah, you are already in my favorite list just because I really enjoy your poetry. you are a great writer.

Hey, you mentioned on a comment on "I dumped you for a reason, and this is it"

The reason it is so "harshly written" is because the girl promised not to do it anymore, and i am a very sweet guy and did my best to be there for her, and she blocked me out.

I cut myself. So i know what point of view you are coming from with your opinion. I appreciate the critisim.

David.