Wow, this is really touching and powerful, i love it. =) i have no idea why others haven't commented this yet, its a wonderful piece of writing.
keep writing, u have so much potential and talent, 5/5
xxx

Awww! This is amongst one of the most
touching poems that I have read today
I loved it. You write splendidly. I am
looking forward to reading more writes
like this one. Keep up the good work
5/5

Letty

Special style, not my type, but beutiful and very special, we love it