Ooooh. I loved this!! It's sooo sad, and I can relate to it like...a lot! Lol...I liked the way you wrote it too...you should write more of your poems like that...anyways yeah this was greatttt. As always...even though I haven't commented lately...I've been reading...lol. I MISS YOUU!!!!! =( But yeah...take care and God bless
11 years ago
Aww...i like cows..theyre soooo ocute....lol..im serious....so ..david..what kinda cow??? im messin...but i like the poem...verdy verdy noice wourk...and yes i misspelled that ON PURPOSE.."but you say hes jus a friend, you say hes jus a friend..."
I really have to comment your work sooner ... i wanna b the first one :'(
To the poem....Very nice poem..Nice emotion but there was something missing in there...not sure what but...it didn't like amaze me like your rest of the work does...But i loved the last stanza it was beautiful! 4.5 / 5
I actually thought it was a very well written poem. There seemed to be a bit of comedy in there, well thats how it came across to me, not all of it, just the cow part, lol, but anyways, i could really feel the emotion and the sorrow... but i do agree with torm, there was a little something missing in there.... i think it was very strong in the beginning and in the last part of the poem, i just didnt feel it anymore. But aside from that, i thought it was very good. 4/5
PS: ill have to check out some more of your stuff.
I love your poem. It has a lot of feeling behind it and it has a lot of good points in it. I have been through this situation and I was blaming myself for the longest time when I came to realize that it wasn't my fault at all.
Helloo... wow i havnt commented on your poems for A LONG time! haha i feel like i've missed alot! anyway.. i luved this poem... very beautifully writting (as all of your poems are!) you've got the talent! i really enjoy reading your poems,, they're different and unique,, and specail indeed! haha i think i've said a lot dont you?
haya 3gab =]
P.S. if you didnt recognize me i used to be "The Bell" lool, just thought that you may be confused!