Comments : Just a Friend

  • 11 years ago

    by Poetess

    Ooooh. I loved this!! It's sooo sad, and I can relate to it like...a lot! Lol...I liked the way you wrote it too...you should write more of your poems like that...anyways yeah this was greatttt. As always...even though I haven't commented lately...I've been reading...lol. I MISS YOUU!!!!! =( But yeah...take care and God bless

    Love youuuu,

    - Poetess

  • 11 years ago

    by Denise

    Aww...i like cows..theyre soooo ocute....lol..im serious....so ..david..what kinda cow??? im messin...but i like the poem...verdy verdy noice wourk...and yes i misspelled that ON PURPOSE.."but you say hes jus a friend, you say hes jus a friend..."

  • 11 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Wow o hteendng broguth i all together wowo excellent work you gett better wit evry wrod..keep it upo amazing stuff.

    lissa

  • 11 years ago

    by Tormented

    I really have to comment your work sooner ... i wanna b the first one :'(

    To the poem....Very nice poem..Nice emotion but there was something missing in there...not sure what but...it didn't like amaze me like your rest of the work does...But i loved the last stanza it was beautiful! 4.5 / 5
    Take Care
    And
    Keep Smiling

    -*-Tormented

  • 11 years ago

    by Steven Odenbreit

    I actually thought it was a very well written poem. There seemed to be a bit of comedy in there, well thats how it came across to me, not all of it, just the cow part, lol, but anyways, i could really feel the emotion and the sorrow... but i do agree with torm, there was a little something missing in there.... i think it was very strong in the beginning and in the last part of the poem, i just didnt feel it anymore. But aside from that, i thought it was very good. 4/5

    PS: ill have to check out some more of your stuff.

  • 11 years ago

    by Trish

    I love your poem. It has a lot of feeling behind it and it has a lot of good points in it. I have been through this situation and I was blaming myself for the longest time when I came to realize that it wasn't my fault at all.

  • 11 years ago

    by Mitsuki

    So sad!!!!! I can really relate to this poem. trying to catch his attention but nothing seem to work.

  • 11 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    Helloo... wow i havnt commented on your poems for A LONG time! haha i feel like i've missed alot! anyway.. i luved this poem... very beautifully writting (as all of your poems are!) you've got the talent! i really enjoy reading your poems,, they're different and unique,, and specail indeed! haha i think i've said a lot dont you?
    take care...
    luv,
    haya 3gab =]

    P.S. if you didnt recognize me i used to be "The Bell" lool, just thought that you may be confused!

  • 11 years ago

    by Deana

    Its hard to be just a friend to someone you love, great poem.

  • IT DoEs ReaLLy BuRn tO bE oN tHe "fRieNdsHiP zOne".. HaVe a LoT oF tHiNgS tO saY bUt wOrDs WoNt coMe oUt..
    aNywaY, GooD wRiTe!!.. ^^,

  • 10 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Love he eneiding it really pulls it all together..godo jobb.

    lissa