Comments : One Last Cry

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, a great one with deep emotion. you have made your point so nicely, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    In a few words you clearly portrayed pain and beauty. Wonderful, deep work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Wow, amazing. Short, yet you got what you where writing about across. It was very good.

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Oh wow... So simple yet so perfect! I absolutely -loved- this one! Nothing more to say.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    A true poet can take any words and make then beautiful, you demistrated that ability here. Nice job.

    -Tainted Miko

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmmm.."one last cry" i was surprise when i open and read this poem, it short but i t hink it express something different good job misstress mabuhay ka ingat!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lying To Live

    Very short ... but very powerful

    luv *~Smile_Full_Of_Lies~*

  • 17 years ago

    by Nelle

    I loved loved this. for being so short it said so much. I love poems in different writing styles this was amazingly perfect. great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wow dude great job i cant stop thinking why this one has a low vote this is great poem and you too have a talented and you can put your emotions on papers and i wonder if you can speak tagalog lols

    Geneross

  • 17 years ago

    by Audrey

    Simple and meaningful. It a rare thing for so few words to mean as much.

  • 17 years ago

    by XxxXLoveless_WristsXxxX

    This poem is short yet so powerful! It takes great talent to be able to write such a short poem with such emotion.

    Keep it up x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    This one was very good. I liked the flow and depth. Nice work, truly.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this, it was short, precise, straight to the point.

  • 17 years ago

    by X2892

    Not 2 bad, itz very good 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I like this one. As a matter of fact, I think it's my favorite one by you. I'm not a big fan of cinquains, but you really took this and made something great out of it. The last line really pulled the poem together and gave it a nice sad effect. But you did a really good job on this! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    4/5 I didnt understand this one! But great writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Karma Hope

    Wow that was amazing writting in just a few lines, very good work...
    Karms.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ksusha

    Its very nicely put. It makes me wonder if there is more of a story with it.