Thinking Inside the Box

by Twisted Heart   Sep 14, 2006


On my way home from school one day
I saw a cardboard box
It was big and it was brown
With yellow polka dots.

As I got nearer to the box
I heard a funny sound
It couldn't have come from inside
But there was nothing else around.

The flaps were closed on the top
But I opened them with ease
I wanted to take a closer look
To see what the sound could be.

When I stood up on my tippy toes
And leaned to see inside
I lost my balance and fell into
A real neat place to hide.

Four sides of cardboard in the box
Nothing else to see
But with my imagination
My thoughts went endlessly.

This box could be a spaceship
That would take me to the moon
Or it could be the makings of
A butterfly's cocoon.

Maybe, it could be a merchant ship
That sails upon the sea
Or a jeep in the outback
Going on a big safari.

It could be so many things
My imagination's lost
And so I'm just here sitting
With aimless thoughts inside the box.

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  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Hahaha! I love polka dots, I wanna see that box now lol.

    5/5

    -Jenna.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Lol, i liked this.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    Haha, cuuuuuuuuuuuute.

    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by John (Mr. Whuppy)

    Twisted Love it
    This reminded me of when one of my kids got a really expensive Christmas present in a big cardboard box and played with box ALL day BUt hey thats kids for you
    A very well written poem
    Respect

    John

  • 17 years ago

    by Ellie

    Cute! I wish my nephew were with me so I could read it to him. >.