Wow, another great historical poem by you, as i always said you are the greatest writer sir. 5/5

I like your variety with words!! (Do you read the dictionary or are you naturally clever?)

Wow, that was great Michael! As are all of your poems.. The flow was effortless and really easy to read.. The descriptions beautiful and the emotion clear.. Very nicely done! 5/5

You call my poem a masterpiece? You're way better than me. The flow was awesome, the descriptions beautiful. And best of all, I have a book on Greek myths and reconized the characters

Wow! Thats such an Amazing poem!! The flow was perfect! I loved your choice of words. Very well written! I really enjoyed reading it! Keep It uP!
And
Keep Smiling

Much Love
-*-Tormented

I've been thinking what to say coz this poem really desereved one great compliment...i swear you are really great and this poem is so beautiful, unique and historical, i loved it too becoz i loved greek & roman mythology!!! Keep up the good work

I totally dig this poem, it's different from the others that you find on here. Keep up the good work! :)

I just love the way you write. You express yourself so beautifully. God bless you.

I love ure poem its beautiful i recently wrote a poem close to that but yours was much better. hey you should check out my poems if you want.
eden

Very different for a love poem... not my favorite but i do like your imagination

Well, that was awesome! Every one of the lines contained so much emotion and power...I loved it! You truly are an amazing writer...Youve got talent!Make the most of it so as we all can read many more poems like this one.Keep writing!
All the best,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

This is a wounderful poem. I realy like the way you included some of the ancient Gods. Keep up the good Im definitely going to read some of your other poems. And I hope that you will read some of mine.

Superb! not a word can explain how amazing this poem is.

Very nicely written. I liked it. The facts through out were good. The flow and the structure like always were outstanding. You are truely a great poet, keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

I like the way U write ...

Great Work

I love that is poem is so different from most of what is on this site...not some 13-16 yr. old pining away their heart, as their world is so bleak and hopeless...anyhow.

East of the sun west of the moon - great opening line...good rythym to the whole poem. great topic and interesting read. your going on my favs list

Great poem.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Take care