I like this, and all the different words you have used!

Jessy! You never fail to amuse me with your lovely poems Hunny. I loved this one it gave me shivers litturally. It was amazing.

This is b far my fave of yours. So powerful and heartfelt. The flow was perfect. Can't find anything but nice things to say about this. Excellent.

Well done jess this is an amazing poem! like most of your poems it contained so much energy and emotion! awesome poem!

sophie:)xo

You are a great writer that is why your every poem is so great.

Wow- lovely description- very, very sad poem. 5.

WOW!! This is an amazinly dark poem written with much skill the poetic flow was just flawless the content was wise yet thought provoking

WOW!

Oooh very deep and dark but again beautifully written. I enjoy your work and think you have such high talent which shines through your poems.

Jessy, again a womderfully unique poem, so sad and full of emotion, so creative yet frightenly real. keep writing
xxxxx

Wow! this is very good. i like the way you express your emotions on paper.
keep it up!!! 5/5

Hey!.. i def. love this poem!.. its now one of my favorites!.. i love the feeling and emotion .. its amazing!

A good poem. very imaginative, and deep.

but it seems (from what ive read) that you mainly stick to an abab cdcd etc rhyme scheme..

this is a good, well very good poem, but i think you should try to break out f this style. =]

Still-5|5-((im not gonna down grade the poem jus cause its like most of your others.))

x.x:Lauren

I love this poem... your a great writer

I've read this on your other account so same thing goes. Wonderful!
5/5 God Bless!

~*Tay*~

You are a great writer. It amuses me to see how well you write for your age. Well age ain't a barrier is it. Anyways, keep up the great work. I bet you'd come up as a great poet in life!

Wow this is a really good poem! All of your poems have so much emotion into them that they make you want to keep reading them~!
You have such a great talent!
Nice Job~Keep up the good work!
5/5 =D