Wow, a great job done here, 5/5 from me.

A very touching piece.

This poem is really upsetting n stuff. I liked the last line though!

Beautiful poem.
The emotions/thoughts are just great.

God Bless!

I liked it. I'm picky when it comes to certain thins such as someone using the number, rather than spelling the word out. Other than that it was well written and I enjoyed it.

Oh my! I loved the piece.. so much emotion and depth! Great work, truly.

Aww. It's so heartfelt and sad. I thought the last stanza was absolutely wonderful. I like a strong ending to a poem. It kind of gives me a review over it. Great job. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

This is another nice poem i love the flow in it weldone!

keep it up!

This makes me wnt to cry.........wow..soo full of emotion...i luved it...it was awsome..

How, sad, touching, yet had a strong voice to it too.

Once again, you have done an amazing job.. I know so many people can relate to this poem.

A very emotional, heartfelt piece.. Very nicely written 5/5 xx

I know im a dude and im not supposed to cry but OMGosh! that made me cry! the way u situated the words and told that story was amazing! i dont even know what to say! that was so sad! thats a 10/5!

I must say that was a poem that made me want to cry and its very skilled for a writter to get a reader to feel what they feel... Goodwork... 5/5 dat was tops...
Karms.

Awww, how beautiful and heart wrenching. I truly felt your pain, and I believe this is one of the best poems I've read on here in a while. Wow, what a relief! I was beginning to think nothing could pull on my heartstrings anymore, but thankfully, you've proved me wrong. 5/5

Wow. This is a very beautiful and heartfelt poem, great job. You display the emotions so well, that the reader could actually feel the emotions as well as the writer. I really liked the last stanza, it was a wonderful way to end the poem at whole. Great job with this one, it was perfect to me. Thx for the comment on my poem too, it meant a lot to me. 5/5 You're a great writer, keep it up and I look forward to reading more of your poems in the future! :)

Stephanie

The lyric flow and rhyming are very uniform in this poem, and though the content is personal in nature I found it to be very interesting. i can honestly say I enjoyed reading this poem

Wow,this poem was hard to read only because i can relate to it, except i the mission I was on, I won, but then I lost my father again for good. anyways, Ur use of words was great, it really made it more emotional and heartfelt. I loved it.

Oh that is so sad.
For a lengthy poem it certainly held my attention and my heart goes out to you. Families are meant to be so precious and perfect yet are often the cause of immense pain.
You expressed your story and emotions well. Keep it up

Hun..That is so sad. I am in a similar situation. So I sort of know how you feel. This made my cry because it really touched me. I wish your father could read this. (If this is true.)
Excellent job. 5/5 Keep it up

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