Save your tears

by jordynn   Sep 16, 2006


Save my heart and stop my breath;
slit my wrists and wait for death.

while i wait lying here;
all my stars will appear.

close my eyes watch them tear;
take away all my fear.

take my heart from beneath my chest;
watch me take the eternal test.

for you I'll wait on the other side;
until the day you've withered and died.

my thoughts are racing, my pulse is low;
i can feel the blood no longer flow.

I'm sorry for leaving, so close so soon;
but my life will stay, in these walls in this room.

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  • 17 years ago

    by X2892

    Very good poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Wow. Powerful poem. I liked the rhyming oif this one. And the flow was good. Your good at writing poems! Keep them up! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by NiaPooh

    Wowzir!!!!
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