Comments : I will have my Revenge, (this one loz)

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Seems like a venting of anger.....this one hit its mark

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, this one was so strong

  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Ooo. Venting poem? Very good if it was. I've done a few myself. (In explicit of course. =P ) I thought the flow was alright, and not too bad, and I liked the anger. =) Great write. 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 17 years ago

    by lauracampbell

    Hahaha lol , idiot proofed for me :p good poem! ya reli gettin nak 4 this

  • 17 years ago

    by Audrey

    Umm...... I take it you were angry. Very angry. The poem was good in it expressed what you meant it to. The words jumped off the screen and crackled in fire.

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow! it sounds lik pure hate in this one!! awsome poem!