A very lowvely dedication to the Father and asking Him to rescue you. Keep praying. Beautiful poem. I loved it. 5/5.

This is so beautiful.
good job

Thankyou for another beautiful poem! i find your passion and faith so inspiring and your poems all reflect it so much, making them all have so much truth and depth. thankyou xXx
p.s. could you please read my poem salvation in the shape of a cross - your comments and criticism wold be much appreciated xXx